Thursday, December 6, 2012

So Sad So Sad

Janie is sad so sad so sad
Her man makes her mad so mad so mad
The men she tries lovin'
Just sit there and do nothin'
Why can't she get a break
from all this heartache and hate
She needs a man who listens
and dosn't expect her to do all the fixen's
she needs a man to protect her
like her nanny wanted

1 comment:

  1. Nice rhythm, and rhymes. But what got me was the last line, "like her nanny wanted" what was the reasoning behind that? Did you like in general? Because in the book Nanny wants Janie to get married to Logan which turns into the exact opposite. So wouldn't that make Janie not like Nanny's advice? I don't know it just struck me as odd in a way.

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